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Tuesday, 9 June 2015
ANZAC biscuit senses poem by marieta
This is my ANZAC biscuit senses poem that I done today I worked a very hard to think of this.We can't just make 1 sentice you heps to make it a good story
Hi Marieta I like your poem so much and the picture and the nice background.
ReplyDeleteHi Marieta I like your poem because it makes sense.
ReplyDeleteHi Marieta I like when you said at the Anzac Biscuits feel smooth and squishy like butter
ReplyDeleteslowly melting .