Today for raz kids other I read a book called Raven and the flood. This book is very intersting. It is kinda like Noah from the Bible. But a bit diffrent. This is diffrent because the Wise men called hsi raven to look for a home. The raven took days to find a new home. Untitll on the seventh day the ravan found a cave that he wanted to rest in. When he went inside he saw a family sitting near a fire place. To find out what happens next go to this link Here.
Monday, 11 September 2017
Current Events
Today for Can Do/ Reading I done Current Events. I got to choose a artical called Silver ferns beaten by England. In each hat we had to write in info on what the hat was. For example if it was blue we had to add in info that the blue hat needed.
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Current Events,
Reading
Friday, 8 September 2017
Art
Today for maths we have being doing art. We had some fun doing this.FIst off we done our planning. Then we have been drawing it. We had to draw 9. Then we had to do this online to start it of and make it look like it is our one on paper.
Poetry Features
Today for inquiry We had to do a poetry pattern. We had to do our parterns first so then we can get a peom to do fro our poster. For our poster we had to add in what is the pattern,The peom and the poetry language feature. We could work with anyone. I worked with Sandra. I worked with her because I always et the same partner.
Thursday, 7 September 2017
Tongan Laugauge Week
Today we learnt things on Tonga. I learnt how to count in Tonga, How to pronounce their animals and more. Thanks to Villiami we done a test and I got most part right since I am half tongan from my mum's side. But I'm Not really an expert at Tonga. FOr our must do we had to create a DLO about Tonga Launguage. We could add in anything.I worked with Ellenora. Ellenora learnt a lot about Tonga amd she learnt how to pronoce them better.
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Learning,
Tonga Lauguage Week
Wednesday, 6 September 2017
Kiwi Can W7
Kiwi can-W7
Today LS1 group B went to kiwi can. We played some games and learnt about self control and self diciplne. The first game we played at kiwi can was Bit Bot Bounce. Then we got into a group and shared types of risk. I diddn't really put my hand up because I am a shy person.Then we played a game. We had a rope that goten smaller. We had to make sure part of our body was inside the rope.Our last activity we had to sit on each other's lap. This was quite hard beacause some people well the boys kept on falling. We had to cooparte to do this.
Persuasive Speech / Ideas
Persuasive speech plan
My topic: No more Frizzy
My argument: Fizzy has been a big problem , Parents have been banding fizzy from their kids because of their weight
Audience: School / LS1 / Other People
How will you greet your audience? Hi There my name is Marieta !!
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How will you introduce your topic in a catchy way? Fizzy … Fizzy has been a common drink in NZ, We Really need to stop this, Kids have been getting Diabetes,Sick,Lazy and big * Fat *
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Write a rhetorical question to make the audience think about your topic: I mean there is a lot of worst things that can happen to you or your kids? Think about it :D
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What is your opinion? Write a statement that clearly states your point of view: Fizzy has been around our world, Kids have been lazy and gaining a lot of weight just because of FIZZY. Let's think, What's the best drink out of fizzy … Water , Water can help you be much healthy, Fizzy can become your death because someone like a person that hates you could poison you by fizzy.
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List some facts or statistics that support your opinion: No More fizzy
Reason 1 : Fizzy can make you have a lot of gas, This could happen at School Work Anywhere,
Reason 2: Fizzy for example Coke has too much sugar in it … this can cause to diabetes
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Reason 3 : Because the Amount of of fizzy you drink like Fanta could cause you to die
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Do you have a solution to the problem? The solution to my problem is that all fizzy should be BANNED!! For good
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Say your opinion again and warn the audience what will happen if they don’t agree with your opinion. Fizzy, FIzzy can be a lot of damage to your body parts, For example your tummy and bottom, The fizzy you drink goes into your tummy and then the gas ends up in there, Then you'd have some pretty stinky gas that comes out, This is called FART, And I mean who would like to smell that?
Well that's it hopefully you agree with my Opinion,
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Persuasive speech plan
My topic: Bullying
My argument: No more bullying
Audience: School / LS1 / Other People
How will you greet your audience? Hello, There my name is Marieta !!
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How will you introduce your topic in a catchy way? Bullying, We should stop bullying, Bullying can lead to very harmful ways and can hurt you different types of ways.
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Write a rhetorical question to make the audience think about your topic: Why should we care about people being bullied , Well there is all types of bullies , for example cyber bully, Cyber bully can be very serious, You might not know the secrets that other people can say about you,And This can lead to a rumor. Which is telling everybody your bad or something, and you don't want anyone to think you're bad.
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What is your opinion? Write a statement that clearly states your point of view: Physical bullying, Physical can hurt you to, Physical bullying is when someone touches you in a bad way. They can push you,Smack you,Slap you on the face and more.
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List some facts or statistics that support your opinion: Stop bullying
Reason 1 : because already over 3.2 million people have been bullied ,
Reason 2 : Because a lot of teens and kids have been missing out there learning just because of bullying
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Reason 3 : You might get hurt by bullying, Kids might have unexplained injuries
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Do you have a solution to the problem?
My Solution is that we should stop bullying. We can do this by just being kind to each other, Standing up for yourself and tell Parents,Friends,Staff and Family.
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Say your opinion again and warn the audience what will happen if they don’t agree with your opinion.
If you don't agree your kid can get hurt easily, They might be feeling sad,hurt and more. They can be mocked by their looks and can listen to a mean poem about them, This is called Verbal bullying. So this is what I'm gonna say, Let's stop Bullying and make the world a better place * Smile *
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Persuasive speech plan
My topic: People don't hurt kids
My argument: People should not hurt kids
Audience: School / LS1 / Other People
How will you greet your audience? Kia Ora, my name is Marieta !! * Smile*
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How will you introduce your topic in a catchy way? People should stop hurting kids, This can lead to smacking into pulling the ear to the car and back inside
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Write a rhetorical question to make the audience think about your topic: What's the difference? The difference is you're just causing your child,Cousin,Student and more to get hurt.
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What is your opinion? Write a statement that clearly states your point of view: Well a lot of strangers,Parents,Teachers have been hurting kids by Smacking them,Punching them, Getting them up by their collar and more other people would do. People have been killing kids just because of their bad attitude, For being Unrespected, Not getting a prize and more
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List some facts or statistics that support your opinion: This is important to stop because
Reason 1 : This can go too far with kids like using a knife to stab them
Reason 2 : Kids are sick of getting hurt
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Reason 3 : You can be injured and go to the hospital for an amount of days,Weeks or if it's too serious years.
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Do you have a solution to the problem? Well My solution is that kids should just get a growling instead, because that can't be bad than getting hurt. We should look after kids because they are important to us, if we had no kids in our world, There would be no person alive… Literally
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Say your opinion again and warn the audience what will happen if they don’t agree with your opinion. You should pretty much should agree because you should stop and actually look after your kid more, And remember if they be bad just growl them so then they can have a safe life and a healthy environment to no harm at ALL TIMES.
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LI: To Create Persuasive Speech
Today for writing we had to create a persuasive speech. First off we started to brainstormour ideas. We done this so then we can choose what to do for our speech. We had to create and write 3 persuasive speeches. The 3 topic's were People to stop hurting kids,Bullying and No more fizzy. I choose thoose because they really felt like they would presuade other people and shopes.
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Creation,
Persuasive,
Writing
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