Jack and jill's Monster adventure
!!Thump Thump Thump!! Jill got scared and got closer to the door then all of a sudden "BOOO"!!!!! Jack said scaring Jill and making her say " AHHH" " Hahahahah" shame you thought I was a monster " hahaha" Jack said.
" It's not funny jack, one day you could die and I could save you, then you won't be laughing now aye" said Jill.Jack got a little embarrassed and told jill to hurry up so then they could go Trick or treating already. Jill Just took her time, but they never knew what was happening.
A monster living deep into the swap.He had a special weapon that would take souls and make the monster bigger. That would mean each Halloween when he takes lots of souls he will grow and finally destroy everything, but one thing he never knew was if you destroyed everything he would not grow much bigger or take more souls.
Finally Jack and Jill was ready, then Jill came up with a bet which was whoever got the most candy gets 5 $ and the loser would get their head dumped with mud. The mud would be like a brown icky muddy shoe. Jack smiled and agreed on the bet.
They started going to houses and getting lollies but then a monster came out. When Jack saw him he started to laugh because the monster was wearing the most ugliest and funniest soul necklace ever. The monster got so mad that he took jack's soul and left jack's body on the ground.
Finally Jill got enough candy to beat jack on the bet. Jill started to look for jack. Then after minutes of looking she saw Jack lying on the ground which made his body freezing cold. Jill was scared after seconds she finally saw the monster,The monster wanted to take Jill's soul too but Jill ran away and toke Jack with her back to her house and down to the basement,
to figure out a plan to get the monster back to where he lived and made sure he'll never take souls and never come back to her town. Jill thought she could use the monster as bait.
Jill finally got someone that was brave and let the monster take her soul. So the girl which was Jack and Jill's mum asked questions to the monster while Jill was hiding and got all the info she needed. Then Jill Finally found a scientist that could make a weapon and put the monster in it's rightful place. Jill went one on one against the monster and use the weapon which was called MTx 900. The monster was finally back into it's rightful place the Swamp.But before Jill used it she made a bet with the monster.
The monster had to give all of the souls he had taken and Jill wouldn't shoot the monster. The monster gave back the souls but Jill lied about shooting the monster. So then she shoot the monster and Jack's soul went back to Jack's body. Then the next day Jill came up to Jack saying" Where's my 5 $?"
LI: To write a narritive and add in Correct Narritive Structure
Today for Writing we had to write down a narritive about last weeks plan.What we had to do was we had to get some of the parts we done in last weeks plan and write some of it done also to plan it better so you know what you are doing.Most of our stories a had to include Jack,Jill and the monster. We had to put in paragraphs.Once we were done we had to look for Punctuations,Grammer,Volcabalary and add Adjective,Similies and a metorpho.
LI: To write a narritive and add in Correct Narritive Structure
Today for Writing we had to write down a narritive about last weeks plan.What we had to do was we had to get some of the parts we done in last weeks plan and write some of it done also to plan it better so you know what you are doing.Most of our stories a had to include Jack,Jill and the monster. We had to put in paragraphs.Once we were done we had to look for Punctuations,Grammer,Volcabalary and add Adjective,Similies and a metorpho.
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