Cybersmart Commenting
Today for cybersmart we done Smart Comments. In a smart comment there is a Greeting,Positive attitude,Suggesten and a Question. We had to comment on Tamaki Primary's blogs. Mr Wong picked out the person we were doing. I got Kira. Kira is a yr 8 at Tamaki Primary. I think her blurbs and work is amazing. While i was reading through her blog I really like how she explanid I think mostly everything that she done. The one thing I liked about her blurb was how they had to get along with other people.
Kia ora Marieta
ReplyDeletekei te pehea koe?
Ko kira toku ingoa
tekau ma rua tau toku pakeke
Nō Tāmaki Makaurau ahau. He uri nō te iwi o Ngāpuhi no Ngati Kahu ahau. Ko Te Kura Tuatahi o Tāmaki tōku kura.
I am a boy and thanks think my work is pretty good I think you didn't that I was a boy and thank you for the outstanding comment.
Something I made add is that kia ora is spelt wrong.
haunga he tu'u pou rangitaki mō te tau e whitu tenei pupuri ake te mahi pai