Revising sentences

Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT is like an arosice poem.Each letters of this word means something in writing.Today we have been focesing on the D.D stands for  Delete . In class Miss Paton shared with us a piece of writing in which we had to delete, take out words and change senteces . Here is my piece  of writing

My copy

Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He's  a tabby cat. Oscar can be annoying . He likes sniffing my  bin. He always come to my house starving. Oscar likes  falling asleep on the couch. He doesn't  like my laptop. He would sit on my lap. Oscar  like’s me to give him the

attention.

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