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Tuesday 9 June 2015

ANZAC biscuit senses poem by marieta

This is my ANZAC biscuit senses poem that I done today I worked a very hard to think of this.We can't just make 1 sentice you heps to make it a good story

3 comments:

  1. Hi Marieta I like your poem so much and the picture and the nice background.

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  2. Hi Marieta I like your poem because it makes sense.

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  3. Hi Marieta I like when you said at the Anzac Biscuits feel smooth and squishy like butter
    slowly melting .

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