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Friday 25 August 2017

POV

Dear Editor

I just wish at Lunchtime and Morning tea everyone could bring in there lollies to eat. I am getting tired of everyone just bringing lollies and then getting in trouble when their caught. I think you should let us be us and just let us eat our lollies we bring to school. The annoyment of not being to bring our lollies to share with others is just not right for us.  We promise that we would throw away our lolly wrapper once we're done eating it. Every kid would be happy bringing lollies to school whenever they want to.I think that this would be a great idea for people that love love love ringing there favourtie types of candy to school.

This is a great idea because the amount of kids that love candy at our school is big. This idea would make so much kids in our school happy that we can finally stop hiding our lollies and just show them to everyone and share them. We want to make a rule that says were allowed lollies at school. This could even be helpful because when other students here that at PBS were allowed lollies , More students will enroll and that might even help the school gain money to help them. Reason 1 : Were tired of getting in trouble from teachers and hiding our chandy from snitches
Reason 2 : Because we want to bring them to school.








LI: What is a point of view
LI: What is the diffrence between fact or Opinion

Today for writing we have been doing Point of views. First we started off with an artical, Mr O got us into groups of a counstraction,Fire Fighters,Mr Sydney and Mr sydney's wife. We had to make up a point of view. Then As a writing group we all shared our point of views. After that we got gave a peice of paper with 3 aarticals and write on paper the point of view,Reasons and the name.  As a group we had to write in 2 paragprahs our own type of POV. then as a writing group we had to send each other our POV then on a google drawing we had to write our feedback on weather we agree or not.

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