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Wednesday 20 December 2017

In Fladers Feild

For this activacty I got to read a poem on the world war. I had to write down what I think about the poem?. Do I like it? and how does it make me feel?

I think the peom is very touching

I like the peom

It makes me feel sae and makes me know that those who go fight war are really brave and it is sad to know they could die.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Marieta,
    Me again! :)
    Thanks for sharing with us how the poem made you feel. When you write about your feelings and emotions it does make your post very personal and authentic. Good job here!
    Also, I want to comment that is really good that before answer the activity you are describing it so well. This is important because your blog is open to the public and by reading the description of the activity your followers will know what is that you are writing about. Well done!
    Kia Kaha,
    Patricia

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  2. Hello Marieta
    Good job on completing this summer learning journey activity. I also found the poem quite touching, as it made me remember all of those poor soldiers that died during the war. Keep up the excellent work Marieta!
    Daniel

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